Waiting for ever
outside a pub -
Dad is booking his bets
Masons Avenue, Hamilton
Green enamel gas oven
tick-tocking Grandfather clock -
our grandparents' house
Out of the blue
A new home
with Aunty Jo -
State House, Papatoetoe.
The title says it all. Visit Tuesday Poem for more great poetry.
I like "out of the blue" -- I can 'see' the State House in Papatoetoe. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen
Deleteyeah great stuff - i like the way dad is after bets not booze - but because a haiku implies so much - maybe booze as well
ReplyDeleteAlmost certainly. Thanks Jennifer.
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